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zutara what a pie fight can do by ~yoshihisnow:iconyoshihisnow:



Ok here I will sum you up, suki did something to make katara mad when they were decorating cakes and pies ( i don't know why they just were.)
    suki come and take this pie like the coward you are, katara shouted at the campfire where everyone was. katara launched the pie at suki, when it hit her face suki took her and tasted the pie. she said and spit it out, you know i dont like coconut cream pie! screamed suki ewwww. when the spit out pie landed on toph , katara burst out laughing. whats so funny fumed toph, and launched a banana cream pie at katara. swoosh, it just missed her, but got on suki again. soon they started throwing oies at each other, and the boys just watched the show. katara stepped on toph's toes and shoved the pie in her face and hair> AAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! you know i just washed my hair yesterday! she lectured. yeah i know, and did the same thing to suki. wait let"s get katara, she doesn't have any pie oon her yet..... they failed and got  tired so they all went to bed.
                                     THE NEXT DAY               
      katara woke up bright and early and saw a tiny brown book that said " suki's diary " hmmn i wonder what she writes in their, just then an evilish grin crept upon katara's face...... she grabbed it quick and opened it up, when she saw the first she cracked up it said " dear diary i was so embarrassed when i was going to sokka's tent at 10:00 that night i ran into zuko, i wonder how sokka felt when zuko walked in thinking it was me" after a couple of pages of pure laughter she heard a knock on the door, she quickly hid the diary and answered the door.hey zuko! heyy ca you come with me for a second? he asked . sure, when they got behind the tree she asked what's up. well you see i really like you and umm, with that he kissed her. when they broke apart katara explained how she really liked him too, but she didn't feel she was ready, she asked him to let her think about, he agreed. Later jet overheard their conversation and thought " how could she like that ire nation scum she should love me!" when katara walked back to the campsite Jet grabbed her and pushed her against the wall and said hey katara how could you like him now he was making her bled on the arms, zuko didn't hear the screams because he was bak at camp.) katara kicked jet so hard in the shin he toppled over screaming . katara ran right to zuko and said she made up her mind that she would date him. zuko was very happy until he noticed that katara was bleeding badly, she tried to say she was fine but that was a lie it hurt terribly. as zuko told her to heal her wounds, and asked her to explain she told him everything, but when katara left the room jet grabbed her.  WHAT WILL JET DO TO HER, I WONT MAKE ANOTHER ONE IF NO ONE LIKES IT, SO LET ME KNOW IF YOU DONT LIKE THE SERIES
©2008-2009 ~yoshihisnow
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Author's Comments

ok it took me an hour to write my longest one yet.
Jet- oh yeah why does katara have to like him
me- because im a zutarian

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hya best story yet love it love it best sister from another mother

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omgg u gotta continue i need to knoo wat happenssss !!!!!!!!!!
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huh, not bad. its not good but its not bad either
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do you really like it, because i'm not that good at a writer, i usually get bad comments

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yeaa i really like it loll
but just a little criticism.. wen someone is talking u should put "" those things so we can kno that someone is talkin and not read the text one shot.. but except for that i really like it and i cant wait for an update ^^


ps: i hope i didnt offend u with the little criticism...
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you didnt and the 2 one is out

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it's ok. i wish you would use quotation marks but everyone has their own style.... now i must get back to typing my fanfiction!

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hi me i love waffles jc:)

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